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CelestOrion

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WOO

Took us long enough to get off of our asses and finish it. Great job, everyone, keep up the great work outside of the collab.

Beautiful

Never before have I seen such splendor in a spoof. You, sirs and myself, have motivated me to strive for the same.
*Salutes*

Normally, I don't review low...

But this is one of those times where criticism needs to be pointed out.
Firstly, I would have suggested drawing your animation instead of using sprites, but since you did use sprites, I'll judge you based on what I saw. Your HUD was atrocious. I would have styled it with pretty much anything besides Chemical Plant/Wing Fortress tilesets.
The sprites weren't even aligned evenly. In the beginning, when Tails is 'flying' the Tornado, it keeps moving around in an unsettling way. Fixing that up should be relatively easy. Clicking 'Continue' every time someone speaks is also annoying. Pressing 'Space' would have been a much better choice. I was also disappointed with the dialog between the characters, since their text did not match their character.
The backgrounds need a LOT of work. Simply drawing a background with the line-tool or brush as you did was horrible for rooms. You should work on putting more time and effort into your backgrounds, to compliment the use of your sprites.
You should also work on the jokes. I either saw them coming a mile away, or they were just to horrible to my taste.

Hopefully you'll take heed of some of the words I've typed. Put them to good use, and perhaps your next animation with sprites might turn out better than this did.

~CelestOrion

awesomesonic99 responds:

you are so absolutly right!
it looked alot better when I was making it. now that i watch it on newgrounds I see: that the hud sucks big ol moose turds and that the sprite work is total crap I will ty to improve. thanks for the help you rock for that. and nice Icon that sonic icon is awesome! ps im addicted to sonic.

~Awesomesonic99.

Impressive

Good job on making the characters fit their respective styles! Everything was laid out in a witty fashion, in my opinion. The quality of everything was clear, too. Keep up the good work!

~CelestOrion

Jazza responds:

thank you very much :)

Good Job

It's well-animated for being a sprite movie. Your quality has been improving over the years as each episode hits NG. I'm also quite happy to see that you've been incorporating some of your own artwork into this, as well. Keep up the amazing work, I can't wait for the next installment to be finished.

~CelestOrion

Nice animation

Yeah, I can agree that it takes some time to get fbf animations completed. However, it seems as if you did a good job on this one. A couple of points were a little choppy, but it wasn't enough to hurt the Flash, itself.
Also, may I ask how it's based on a true story?

~CelestOrion

Wow

This did not look like a Flash, period. The detail was just amazing, and I found myself laughing at every scene. Great job with the humor, I expect great things from you.

~CelestOrion

More

This is more than a simple stick animation. You created a fluid environment for the characters, and animated everything very well. I was quite impressed by this animation, you should continue this work. Keep it up!

~CelestOrion

Cute

It's in beat with the song, the animation is cute, but I personally think it would be more appealing if there were a touch of backgrounds here and there. Nothing big, maybe a few outlines of terrain or something, but all in all, it wasn't bad. Keep it up.

~CelestOrion

Classic

I remember watching this Flash years ago, but now that I have an account, I can review it.

The animation was fluid, the artwork was well-drawn, and I have to admit, I found myself laughing quite often during this video. Keep up the good work, you two!

~CelestOrion

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